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  1. Date: 6/5/2009 11:42:00 AM
    Beautifully written and so very wise. Well done. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 9:20:00 AM
    Holy first Aid for the Soul!! This is an Amazingawesomelovelybrilliant writing! What a beauty! I love tankas, and let me tell you, this is a great one! Another winning? : ) ... This one goes to my favs, Carrie! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 6:30:00 AM
    there's quite a lot of truth in this very short poem, which makes it more powerful. Thanks for such an insightful write! :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 6:16:00 PM
    i love this poem carrie. uplifts the spirit. great work. ~Andrea Bianca :)

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 6:53:00 AM
    Oh Carrie, you are a wise and talented lady. I feel your heart and respect your strength. I absolutely love this poem which speaks volumes with few words. Beautiful, you and your poem. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 3:20:00 AM
    thank you sweet, wise Carrie for supporting my little contest. :) XO Kristin

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 8:44:00 PM
    This is a beautiful write but sad at the same time. God Bless. Ron

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 7:27:00 PM
    Such a wonder you be, Dear; poet, in every sense of the word, as this selection clearly demonstrates; I love the end couplet, which brings it all into perspective- Much fortune with this contender, in Kristin's contest! Thank-you, for your, as always, insightful comments of my humble offerings- Joy be to you, Carrie!! poet butterfly

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 6:09:00 PM
    Carrie, I love this my friend...the first line speaks so loudly....it is okay to hurt at times....very good write..wish you the best of luck.

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 5:51:00 PM
    Embracing the pain often leads to a cathartic release that's good for the spirit. Very nice poem, Carrie! You should do well in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 5:45:00 PM
    Wonderful note to oneself and very wise words. Quite profound, really. Love n hugs, Christie