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Morning Moment

After the brief night
Into the rising sun
Five blackbirds in flight

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  1. Date: 6/24/2009 1:43:00 PM

    A beautiful moment it is, mornings are my favorite part of the day...Raul

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 12:47:00 AM

    Once could almost see this haiku, like a beautiful photo taken in that instant--you've captured that moment indeed! :)

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 4:41:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery and rhyme for a creative poem. Enjoyed it. Have a nice weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 12:42:00 PM

    Great haiku, Jim. Love the image of the birds flying toward the sun.