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I thought

i thought that i loved u
i thought that u were the one
i thought i gave my heart to u
but i thought wrong

i thought so much about u and i would die without u
i thought u broke my heart, and let me fall really hard
but all my thoughts miss led me as i thought wrong

u were just another boy that tried to brake me
u were just another guy who thought he could hurt me
and make me cry

i am glad i dated u as now i no i never really loved u
it was lust that was controlling me
and making me believe in something that was never real
i opened my eyes this morning and my heart did not pain
that's when i saw my heart left your silly game
u stole my heart so u think but my heart never ever left my chest
as i am still breathing

i have moved on u were just a little mountain
that i thought i wouldn't ever be able to pass

i am glad i thought wrong
as now i can move now
with my heart whole
and the worlds biggest smile
as i am free from your lies
and your deception
aggression
depression
your bipolar and separation

i no longer need to wonder
about your manipulation as i am free
i can now find my true love
as your are no longer apart of me

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  1. Date: 5/28/2009 5:21:00 AM
    It hurts to be wrong in love ... but you bring this great sense of mutual consent to it ... a thing we need more of to stop all wars ... great poets are great sociologists too ... definitely a bloom of a write. Love and peace.