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Golden Sight

Elegant yellow,
Outlines the cumolus clouds;
Reflecting below,
Bright as the chrome star,
Glistening off the waters;
As the sun goes down.

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  1. Date: 7/8/2009 11:38:00 PM

    This is beautiful! Your poetry is an open movie! Please keep posting! - eduardo

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 4:48:00 PM

    Beautiful image you paint here, a chrome start is a sight to see...Raul

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 6:24:00 PM

    The image you create here reflects the reason poetry is such a pleasure to read, Justin. Seeing this sunset through your eyes is so colorful and rewarding. Great choka! Love, Carolyn