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life lies

i know the talent of my mind

is making you arrogant



i have it .....

and there it is.....



the gift of being able

to dress up costume jewelry



as if it were real



so i go on

and forget

the costume was



only for show



then old winter 

sneaks in ....

and the sun



turns her face away



how ironic....

i think of winter

as  you.

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  1. Date: 5/29/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Congrats on the selection. Finally, someone has something to say about personal matters, and has the style and imagination to put together a first rate poem. daver

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 9:40:00 AM

    I love this poem. It’s got a lot truth, but what’s the irony of winter and make up? I believe that it’s good to be natural than making up This piece is awesome… keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 8:03:00 AM

    Great writing! this speaks loudly to me and how clever your metaphors are. Those last three lines sum it up exactly right. Awesome. Love Christie

    harrington Avatar janetta harrington Date: 11/15/2011 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for reading my poem. and for understanding it. most of the time i write things and no one, even me at times, don't understand what i am trying to say. so your comment was refreshing.