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Spiderweb

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Spiderweb

Compressed predator instincts
Exist in the most primitive dimension

Textile complex of nerves
Mixture of nebulas and herbs
Blinking imperfect echoes

Is it a crop of static points?
Yet there’s no sign of growth
No sprouting into a G minor code
A multi-fingered park
For a suicide octagon roll?

Most probably
Horde of wormholes on the wall
Dementia brought cheese mentality

Expose your paper gestures
And fold
Extreme fisherman-frontal jump
Into the scribbled reflections of
A starving point

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  1. Date: 10/16/2009 9:59:00 AM
    i love this one. Monkey face @(0.0)@~ (Saj lol inside joke) is way right. some of your stuff reminds me of pink floyd lol. love your work though, its complicated and has integrety. xo Raiin

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 6:22:00 AM
    I love the poem.but i hate spider.lol Thanks for the poem comment.

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 11:43:00 AM
    your poetic leaps within lines are very cool!! Jim

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 10:49:00 PM
    Yes, again and again I fall into love within the soup. very nice web Cesar. :)

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 12:45:00 PM
    wow what a ride!..verse 1 OK...2 verse ? A textual complex of nerves/ mixed with nexuses and verve/ blink with imperfect echos..perhaps? Verse 3 A crop of static points/ No sign of growth/ No linear G minor code/A multi-fingered spoke parked/angluar perimeter set for a suicide roll? Verse 4 ? Verse 5 Expose your silken gestures/Reweave the net/Extreme fisher of the frontal lobes get/Reflect your angnst into a straving point. ..Perhaps that makes more collerlation to title? Light&Love

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:48:00 AM
    Complicated your writing, yet so fascinating. I find I can read this (need to actually) many times and get something new each time. Amazing. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:58:00 PM
    Love your comparison of the spider's form to "A multi-fingered park For a suicide octagon roll." They do like creatures from a primitive era. You have a very interesting writing style and spiders make a great topic. Excellent writing, Cesar! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 5:37:00 AM
    This has some terrific lines :) I really love the fourth verse and that ending line. Great title too. :):) Love Christie

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:26:00 AM
    I Find your description of this subject quite A Pretty.I Know the song Interstellar Overdrive by Pink Floydd*Have it on my phone:p*So yee You Do resemble itXP Great Words,C. XoJojo