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Such Brutality

Lillies furnish the rose’s nest
Imperious towards all
It flounders its best
Yet ravishing rose shan't fall
Fight back the pest

Dominate to prevail
The Lillies overwhelm Rose
In all counts, It shan't fail
It’s sheer force attack blows
Victory may seem pale

Pointless, leaves splattered I see
Lillies to the left, Rose to the right
There is no one left but we
Maximum pain that blinds sight
Alas, where is the mon-ey

I am the roots of all
I am the farmer to them
I am not nature’s call
I am the murderer
I shall condemn.


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  1. Date: 7/14/2009 6:45:00 AM

    This final stanza rocks: "I am the roots of all/I am the farmer to them/ I am not nature’s call/I am the murderer/I shall condemn."...Awesome, you're very talented, Sami. Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 1:02:00 PM

    beautiful and great flow.... love how smoothly it read. enjoyed and have a great day.

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 2:06:00 AM

    I love the metephor here; especially the last verse. thank you so much for your placing in your contest, i am honored. lessings to you always, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 2:06:00 AM

    Ooops! I meant blessings! :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 1:59:00 PM

    Stark and brillilant writing. I really love the third verse. Awesome. Love Christie