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Door

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Door

Highway sliced
Geometrically whispered
Into your eyes
Silks down through your mind
A limpid sighted magic spell
Fibonacci’s stepping repelled

Bilateral storm
Trapped by duty
And boxed voids
That familiar smell:
Skyscraping cylinders
And footnotes

It zips aside
High-toned warning
Like elder numbers rhyming

Prepare for abstract cosmovision
Liquid language gasified into strings
Softly spoken touch
Of the sunset mist
Morphing everything

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  1. Date: 5/30/2009 3:12:00 PM
    i read it repeatedly felt magnetize. simply phenomenal. thanks cheers

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 4:52:00 PM
    A wondering poem you have written! i agree with sajdah al-riyami!

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 7:40:00 AM
    Wow. And I must agree that last verse is killer awesome. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 7:03:00 AM
    The structure of this poem is Freakin' Beautiful.Yew dont usually read me saying Freakin' So TOPS!.You:have to listen to this song called"Let The drummer Kick" by The Citizen Cope.Your poetry is similiar to this song.Please*.*

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 6:49:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Cesar. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/25/2009 4:34:00 PM
    Awesome writing brother man..

  1. Date: 5/25/2009 3:53:00 PM
    This is an amazing write but i especially loved those last five lines"prepare for abstract cosmovision liquid language gasfied into strings" simply flippin great! :) Love Christie

  1. Date: 5/25/2009 3:02:00 PM
    wow,this is wow,i love the way you combined this and it flows sweetly to the reader,i can reread again and again--charma