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I Died For You

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I Died For You

I Died For You,  that pain that hides deep inside my soul that hurts as if im going 100
crashing my car into a pole.
I borrowed you my heart and you gave it back broken.
As i try to find all the pieces i ball my fists and my anger releases.
Today was the day that u said that you loved me.
Then you tell me you will never hurt me but you lied.
 I cried and i cried and i cried until i could cry no more.
 Waiting for your footsteps to walk through the door.
 Hours later i am in my bed with red stains and slits in my wrists.
 As i doze off into a dark sleep i see that bright light so I take a giant leap towards it.
 We were suppose to be together forever but now i am dead and when I'm coming back is it
Today?  
Tomorrow?
Next month?
No its never.

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  1. Date: 11/4/2010 9:16:00 PM
    Wow I think you feel the same way as I do. As long as we write about it and not do it too. Love the poem

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 6:57:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Ian. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol