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eyes filled of Rose

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                                                  Promiscuous rose
                                              Bathing in glints of the sun
                                                  I couldn’t resist





                                                
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  1. Date: 5/27/2009 3:58:00 AM

    I think this is what a haiku should be- beautiful

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 4:24:00 PM

    Glad you didn't resist because I enjoyed reading this one. Nice artistic touch too. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 6:07:00 PM

    Faints in complete delight.... This is so beautiful I could live in it. Stunning Haiku James.

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 12:41:00 PM

    B E A U T I F U L

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 10:25:00 PM

    touching=]]TinkBabyy

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 6:38:00 PM

    Oh that prmiscuous rose...wonderful write...wow. BG

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 6:01:00 PM

    Hi James Beautifully written. I can smell the aroma of that lovely rose. I agree with Christian, that first line is perfecto! A perfect Haiku! Thanks for your welcome comment on my latest. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 5:59:00 PM

    Wow. Truly awesome! Complete with artwork too! Excellent haiku. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 5:33:00 PM

    The first line is amazing...love that..wonderful haiku..good work.