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Insight

Heaven's furry sheep
Grazing the light atmosphere
Bares blue the sky's bloom

Clouds were made to weep
Not paint portraits on blue air
Trees without perfume

The virtual sea
These Jason's sail, hides nothing
Except death's surprise

The eyes graze the deep
Visions of the mind, what fear
Like frosty waves leap

From the hearts dark sea
The wind of thoughts in rags bring
Logic's cold demise

Love should not regret
The fancy of the heart, wing
It, denying death

For clouds' sheep are dreams
Dream's love are clouds, the blue air
With new magic teems 
 

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  1. Date: 5/20/2009 12:18:00 AM
    Great imagery David Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 10:58:00 AM
    remarkable talent! my friend! Jim

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 6:45:00 AM
    I like how you had described clouds as "heaven's furry sheep"(i hope i didnt misinterpert it wrongly:p) This haiku makes me think of the sky in create imagery:)