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Painting by Sorrows

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Painting by Sorrows

Gentle strokes of sorrow brush over you.
Fragility of soulless eyes deep blue
Are closing, weeping tears of knowing truth.
Be gone haunting questions of destiny.

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  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:45:00 PM

    Beautiful image!

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 11:24:00 AM

    Wow in a few words you affected me deeply you really are very clever well done ... Love Jayne

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 8:52:00 AM

    You paint a sorrowful and deeply emotional picture here we can all relate to at some point in our lives. Love that last line especially. Exceptional poetry. Thanks for your comments - the second one had me giggling. Warmest wishes. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 5:35:00 PM

    Paul, Sometimes truths' reality can make one cry. Especially when their hoped destiny falls to the wayside in a moment's frenzy. You have a well written poem with a nice flow here. Keep writing, DAS-J

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 8:36:00 AM

    The ending is terrific..be gone haunting questions of destiny..I can see the madness of these questing probing this mind..so well done.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 8:05:00 AM

    I like this poem.Very direct and deep,keep it up!