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Downburst

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Downburst

An a abundance
Of fruited gifts from heaven
On the market floor

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  1. Date: 5/18/2009 4:54:00 PM

    yup..waste not ..want not..nice haiku! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 8:03:00 AM

    I can see all the bursts of colors beaming from this very creative Haiku!

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 6:38:00 AM

    This is so different! It would usually be me to make a whole display of fruit or veggies tumble down! So clumsy I am! : ) Great haiku! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 12:24:00 AM

    A shrewd observation Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 8:27:00 PM

    This is an awesome write. Very creative. I love the second line. The message to be thankful is all throughout this write. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:47:00 PM

    This one has me thinking dear lady...line two is magical...a lot of thought my friend in this write...well done.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 12:56:00 PM

    Laura, What an insight. God gives us so much, but often His gifts go unrecognized. Great write! Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:59:00 AM

    Wow! I can just see a busy market and all of the fruits around. It's amazing how, in the right places, that man and nature can live together. This is truly gifts from heaven. Thanks for the comment Laura. Nate