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Morning Dew

Early rising sun, Water streaming down the spine; Of the laced green leaf.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2009 10:44:00 AM

    A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 12:33:00 PM

    Justin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 7:00:00 PM

    Justin, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 10:53:00 AM

    Beautifully done, Justin. Shows much thought given to each word in this excellent haiku!! This is a very well-deserved poem to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 6:32:00 AM

    Tidy Haiku Justin, congrats>>James

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 10:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Justin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 10:01:00 AM

    Congrats Justin on your haiku being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 5:43:00 PM

    i love this haiku

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 1:38:00 PM

    Very nice short poem. Cangratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 7:48:00 AM

    Justin - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 12:42:00 PM

    Awesome imagery. "The spine of a leaf" brilliant. ~Des Juan

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 7:37:00 PM

    Post-rain visions; peaceful, like a moment of starting life =) thanks for the experience C=

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 10:30:00 AM

    i loveee it haha the last line is craziiii cool haha check ur soup mail!=]]TinkBabyy

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 2:55:00 PM

    Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 9:41:00 AM

    Monumental talent here ... thanks for your comments ... let me encourage that you cultivate this dedication to the greatest precision.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 11:19:00 PM

    Lovely imagery Justin, I'm adding you to my favorite poet's list. Love E.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 8:19:00 AM

    hm.. "of the laced green leaf",is quite a great way to creating imagery

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 10:49:00 PM

    Really nice haiku lovely nature filled images, keep writing friend. Conor J

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 10:06:00 PM

    Fabulous work, love the image you paint in words. DN

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 8:39:00 PM

    Instant imagery! Beautiful. -Alley

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 7:22:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, Justin. I love the image of the water on the leaf. Never thought of it as a "spine" before, but truly it is when you hold a leaf up to the light. So nice to have you aboard! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:31:00 PM

    I love this form of poetry. the last line is my favorite... good job. welcome to the soup hope you find this site welcoming.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:16:00 PM

    Welcome, Justin! This "Morning Dew" is a brilliant haiku, my friend! Keep on sharing. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 10:56:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Justin, James

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 8:19:00 PM

    Beautiful image, Welcome to Poetry Soup, I love morning sessions, I sit and paint a picture with words as an artist does on canvas...Raul