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Masterpiece

Masterpiece

 By James Marshall Goff





picture 

                    our planet


                                        framed in


                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~
                                                    L                  L
                                                    O      our      O 
                                                    V    planet     V
                                                    E                  E
                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~

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  1. Date: 6/22/2009 4:18:00 PM

    Great illustration, with a good substance, to back it up,

  1. Date: 6/12/2009 9:06:00 PM

    well thought out...

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 6:38:00 AM

    James...so clever and so true. As John sang in his "Imagination"...what a world this would be if we could do this. Patricia

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 8:56:00 PM

    "Lovely"...and creative. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:13:00 PM

    Yes, James. This is definitely a masterpiece. Excellent senryu. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 5:29:00 PM

    Creative James. Better for us than Ozone. Vince

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 10:18:00 AM

    this is a great image to have. A vision of love in a world chaos.....very good!

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 7:20:00 AM

    i always do

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 6:39:00 AM

    Simple yet very elegant. Actually took me a while until I figured out the frame aspect of the 'painting'. I love the visuals. Now let me turn CNN back on and see what they have to report on for our planet today...something good I hope. -Yoni

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 6:51:00 PM

    Brillant!!!! -Alley

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 9:22:00 AM

    O boy! Then even I would be surrounded by the desire of my heart ... very inspirational. Bravo

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 5:53:00 PM

    Bravo!!! Stands in applause! You are a Master of peace my friend. ;)

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 11:29:00 AM

    And picture a time of eternal peace ... and you and I brother could sing our songs from sea to sea dancing to the Tchaikovsky of the waves ... great moment to be alive, my friend, thanks for being there. Love always.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:18:00 PM

    Excellent work Jim two poems in one.One for my favourites..Thank you for your welcome blog comment Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 9:10:00 AM

    this love pictured so beautiful framed in my heart and going to my favs---bravo

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 6:30:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL! That kite gotta soar, baby! Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 7:33:00 PM

    BRILLIANT Jim! Love every word and at the end the lovely form you used is effective and eye catching, You provoke a nice thought too! Thank you for commenting kindly on my work, always appreciated.

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 6:20:00 PM

    Very well done. Like the layout also. Thanks for the comment. Nate

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 8:53:00 AM

    Jim Way to go! This says it all....Ahhhh, I can feel the love. Awesome indeed. One of my favorites for sure. With no religion the world really could unite in the spirit of love, no strings attached!Thanks for your inspiring comments on my latest Visions. I appreciate your sentiments very much. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Look forward to reading more of your outstanding poems in the future! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 6:19:00 AM

    Wowser! There'd have to be an end to organized religion and geopolitical borders! I'm for it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 3:58:00 AM

    that would be nioce, wouldn't it? lovely, love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 1:51:00 PM

    James Wow very clever form and a wonderful thought of what the world could be! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 9:44:00 AM

    I wish there was more of it in our world, nice work James...Raul

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 9:03:00 AM

    Wish we could look around and see nothing but the "love" you describe, James. Maybe with the type of positive thinking you inspire, we can make some changes for the better. Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 6:46:00 AM

    This is so wonderful.....should be published for all the world to see and use as poster-child to save the planet! ~ Terrific job!! ~ Love, Carrie Perhaps you should submit this to an Earth Day organization !!!

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 5:31:00 AM

    Jim, this makes me smile. How I would love this planet to be framed in love. Just wonderful. Love Christie

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 4:15:00 AM

    Brother Jim, you are way too kind with your words...thank you so much for making me walk a little on air.

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 4:05:00 AM

    This is very creative brother..love the movement of the words and the ending does it all.. good work.