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Blinded by The Light

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Blinded by The Light

I dreamt of you last night 
Echoes in an empty corridor
Foot prints leading to a door to outside
White oblique, nothingness, cold, empty
colorless snow storm lost and all alone…..
Blinding white; you could not find your way
Frozen in time and space time erased
Not able to discern which way was up or down
Blinded by White


East west north south.
Desperately seeking ,.seeking
Seeking, not finding
Frozen tears 
Iscicles forming
And all the while I was inviting you to come into my warmth
And come in out of the cold
Come here and let me back into your heart again.
And you answered;
I’m not lost I am just dreaming

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  1. Date: 5/16/2009 3:14:00 AM
    Jeremiah, What a nice comment from a gifted writer! I am also humbled to see your post remarking on my scribbles. mya your days be happy and creative!

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 3:12:00 AM
    Hi Colin. Long time since we have crossed paths. Thank you dear one ,for your remark and comforting little smiley man.Yours is a real compliment,since you shine like the stars and you write like nobody else I have ever seen. I am humbled you were here to say hello.

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 6:59:00 AM
    Hi Koko... wonderful poetry ! ;)

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 6:53:00 AM
    Beautiful poem indeed! - jeremiah