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Whispering Wind

Whispering wind through the trees

Blowing comfort amid your breeze

How you dilute ones misery 

Surely a miracle one could agree

Fill me up with serenity

Take your time …drift through me

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  1. Date: 7/18/2009 8:26:00 AM

    Great writing using personification of the wind. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 4:03:00 PM

    short and sweet. yes you did it this time. this is a great peace. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 12:26:00 PM

    mmm ... a pleasure trove is found within the comfort of your words, sublime!

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 7:12:00 AM

    Jane, thank you so much for that warm and wonderful congrats! Appreciate it so very much. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 5:37:00 AM

    The wind often does feel miraculous. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 3:20:00 PM

    Nature is a soothing thing for anyone's heart well done! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 3:17:00 PM

    it is the caress of a loving God. John loving iii