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Summer Ensemble

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                                                   Breezes orchestrate

                                           Windchimes melodius sounds

                                                    Music fills the air

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  1. Date: 7/9/2009 5:35:00 AM

    I really love this one. Thanks for writing it. Sara

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 9:00:00 PM

    A well written haiku. great job laurie!

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 1:13:00 PM

    Give me an "rrrrrrrrr" LOL orchestrate..lovely

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 9:02:00 PM

    Like this one alot.

  1. Date: 5/11/2009 9:56:00 AM

    Prettiest haiku so far.

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 5:15:00 AM

    Dear Laurie, Great Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 12:31:00 AM

    And complements you words so well Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 8:26:00 PM

    Very beautiful short poem. The sound fills the whole soupland. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the warm comment on my write. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 6:18:00 PM

    oh the sweet sound of wind-chimes! sounds like a haiku written with delight! and thanks for your comments! Laurie, you are very sweet...Jim

  1. Date: 5/8/2009 8:44:00 AM

    short and beautiful. have a great day.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 4:42:00 PM

    As welcome as a summer breeze, you offer the reader a breath of fresh air that evokes a beautiful melody, Laurie. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 2:06:00 PM

    Laurie, this is music to my eyes : ). Absolutely gorgeous. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 12:54:00 PM

    I love the whole thing, it's heading to my favorites. Great job...Raul

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 12:24:00 PM

    Got me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery. Good job! Karen

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 11:09:00 AM

    Dear SIS, Great Haiku LOVE YOU...HG Soup Mail Call Again

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 10:34:00 AM

    This is beautiful writing my friend.. the breeze playing a melody...nice work.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 9:44:00 AM

    IT'S A THRILLING HAIKU.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 9:35:00 AM

    Dear Laurie, This Haiku brings music to the ears Beautifully Composed LOVE ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 9:08:00 AM

    Like ...Windchimes melodius sounds ... your talent chimes a wind refreshing for my read. Love

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

    ....Smile, I love windchimes~the wind is always stirring where I live~and they are 'always' playing their mesmerizing melodies~kind of like most or "Your" writes dear lady!!!!:):)~Beautiful Poem Laurie"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Gorgeous & Beautiful Day Dear Lady!!!!:):) Bye ~

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 9:01:00 AM

    Smile~There "You" go again~being soo gentle and soft!!!!:):)~Why are "You" so, "Enchantingly Beautiful!!!?":):)~Smile, "Goodmorning Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that "You" have been doing wonderfully dear lady~from the loveliness of this beautiful Haiku~it seems as though hopefully "You" are!!!!?:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 8:41:00 AM

    Laurie if you love wind chimes, you would love my place. They are a blessing to me. Soothing sounds that always seem to relax. God Bless, Ron

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 7:10:00 AM

    It's messing up my hair!!! (The music's nice, however!)

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 7:00:00 AM

    Yes, I see the orchestra assembled with all th einstruments of nature ... and feel your write.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 6:22:00 AM

    Brilliant! "Music fills the air"...the sound of the wind filling the air? It isn't amazing? Wonderful description, Laurie. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 6:22:00 AM

    I love the title and this is a soft and lovely haiku. Thanks for the smile this Thursday morning. Love you. me