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Growing Older

                                     Trouble
                                   Scary, Fun
                          Running, Slipping, Falling
                  Magnetic, Frenzied, Smooth, Glassy
                         Breathing, Smiling Laughing
                                 Restful, Calm
                                        Peace

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  1. Date: 8/6/2009 11:42:00 AM

    wow big scary trouble this rite is so deeep to me cuz if someone knows about trouble i guess i have experience lovely rite mr.fuller keep writing ur awesome!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:28:00 AM

    I like the way it starts out like big trouble but then things are really okay.... good J.O.B. mike

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 10:48:00 PM

    Excellent work, I like the use of the gerunds...Raul

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 8:21:00 PM

    You did it great!!! I love it! Although every word "works" through the lines, I'm quite impressed with your gerunds: "Running, Slipping, Falling, Breathing, Smiling, and Laughing"...You said that it was dedicated to me...Not with that title!!!!! : )....This is brilliant, S. Michael! Brilliant, can you hear me? Ruben.