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Brokenhearted

All I feel is pain
Haunted by past memories,
Leaves me all depressed.

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  1. Date: 5/19/2009 5:25:00 PM

    depression is a hard thing to face. I hope things work out for you.

  1. Date: 5/8/2009 8:46:00 PM

    Yes, the brokenhearted path is a hard one to travel. the pain feels like 10,000 knives cutting into you all at once with a very dull blade. A powerful and moving Senryu!

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 2:58:00 AM

    OMG! I LOVE IT! It explains me and what I am and how I truely feel everyday.. AMAZING! Outstanding Job!

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 12:59:00 PM

    Sadness flows from your pen and I think some of the greatest work are from such a time in our hearts. I bid you a happy day filled with smiles from the sun. Blessings...Raul