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The Peace Maker

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                                                         Oh restless spirit
                                                               
                                       
                                              Seek the one that calms the storm


                                                      And in Him find peace

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  1. Date: 10/25/2009 1:55:00 PM

    Amen! So much truth shared in just three lines. Thank you for sharing this message with us. Blessings to you. Karen

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 4:34:00 PM

    Nicely written

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 10:08:00 AM

    in the poem are you talking about god? its short but very powerful. I like it. You did a splendid job on it. Keep up the awesome work.

  1. Date: 5/8/2009 6:45:00 PM

    nice.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 12:18:00 AM

    mail call!!

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 10:44:00 AM

    Amen Amen let it be Laurie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 5:25:00 AM

    Smile~The answer to the bittersweet write which I just read!!!:):)~But not just for one, but all I somehow hope~whether "God" be within, whatever form one chooses to see Him~Smile~As long as its truly "Him!!!?":):)~"Excellent Write of Hope Dear Laurie Ginn~'Perfect!!!'":):)~Smile, I believe "You" have one more....

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 9:19:00 PM

    Dear Laurie, LOVE this great Write ALWAYS YOURS...HG Soup mail call

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 8:41:00 PM

    Dear Laurie, A very faith inspiring Write YOUR POETIC Religious Talent Shines with the Truth in this amazing Haiku superb LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 7:59:00 PM

    Oh Laurie, storms there are many, Lass. Your true haiku almost makes me cry. You are a treasure. And most gracious thanks for your continued support! Love, Jim

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 2:20:00 PM

    Did you know a "gun" was called a peacemaker? men... Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 9:58:00 AM

    Thrilling and fascinating.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 6:35:00 AM

    Restless and peace are so antithetical ... it brings resolution out of this concise span of words ... gathering all meaning to a singularity of moment. Awesome.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 5:35:00 AM

    You got mail! K.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 5:17:00 AM

    Good morning sweetheart! Such a lovely SENRYU, with beautiful flow and excellent word selections... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 4:53:00 AM

    ... and also peace me in ... I could sit by your poem like water and stare into its peace, love

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 2:05:00 AM

    So true Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:16:00 PM

    Absolutely, a very true and profound statement. Thank you so much for all your kind words and enduring support. God Bless you my friend. Ron

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 12:25:00 PM

    Oh thank you for this inspiring message. Trying to make my way back here. A joy to read Ms. Laurie. I thank you once again for writing. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:00:00 AM

    Great advice. It is well spoken in this haiku. Keep writing. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 10:29:00 AM

    Amen! What a wonderful message in just three lines. Blessings to you for sharing your inspirational words with us. Karen

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:51:00 AM

    Absolutely clever and inspiring, Laurie! Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:47:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku, loved the message...Raul

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:36:00 AM

    Amazing haiku, beautiful and calming. good advice for anyone. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 9:07:00 AM

    Surely we see God's work when we "find peace." Great work, Laurie!

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 8:40:00 AM

    Amen my friend a short poem full of peace and truth , one of my fave scriptures is be still and know that i am God, anyway God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:52:00 AM

    Oh my Laurie....this is a keeper....I need to keep this under my pillow, in my wallet ....available for those times I need the calm...thank you!

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 5:52:00 AM

    this is a fantastic haiku. These were the first poems i learned, and my god, you seem to be a master

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 5:51:00 AM

    nice haiku,the peace maker-My GOD---WONDERFUL