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The Heartless Giant

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The Heartless Giant

The pirates stole the giant’s heart
So that he could love no more
Carried away by horse and kart
To their ship just off the shore
 
The pirates had a heart attack
The giant called for a storm
They decided to take the organ back
So that things could return to norm

The ship ripped and split in two
All lives were lost at sea
The heart sank deep into the blue
But still continued to beat
 
Have you ever met a heartless giant?
Things would never be the same
With rage and anger he grew defiant
To make up for the pain

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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Good morning Rory, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 5:46:00 PM
    Nice write Rory, they stole the heart of Brother Andre in Montreal, but it was miraculously returned, all is well that ends well, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 11/4/2009 3:19:00 AM
    great imagination! Rory! love your poetry! jim

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 10:58:00 AM
    Evokes thoughts of Davy Jones' Locker, well written Rory .......Janette

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 1:59:00 AM
    Very insightful...Well said, my friend. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 5:28:00 AM
    wonderfully penned-the giant had a big heart full of love-this is nice and deep,i enjoyed it my friend and welcoome to our soup family---charma.

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 5:22:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this tale and thought it was well written

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 12:05:00 AM
    Nicely written! Poor giant. Welcome to the soup! - darkpoet

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 11:45:00 PM
    Welcome to the Soup Rory! Excellent quatrains... an intriguing story with fine cadence and rhyming. Best wishes, Keith