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love

what is wrong with me
what is my issue
why am i so in love with you
when will i stop
where will i be if i dont 
what shall become of me
when i let you take my heart

these are the questions that race through my love ridden heart
these are the songs that ring through my solem ears
these are the words that flow through me 
these are the cries of my faithful dreams

if there is love will it come to me
if there is time will it be mine
if that is so, where will i be
if the world just collapsed
if my heart just died
if my eyes just closed
if i just fell

these are the questions that race through my love ridden heart
these are the songs that ring through my solem ears
these are the words that flow through me
these are th ecries of my faithful dreams

will you love me too
will you take my heart
will i stop asking my self these questions
will this ever end
will you sing to me
will it be about mermaids and fairies
will you really love me
will i really trust you

what is wrong

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  1. Date: 6/18/2009 9:33:00 AM
    This is very emotinal. There is a place and time for everything to bloom and develop into something beautiful. Be patient and leave the heart open. Good work!

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 3:44:00 PM
    I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH!!!!! ITS MY FAVORITE ONE OUT OF ALL OF THEM, AND YOU HAVE SOME AMAZING POEMS!!!!