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Morning Glories

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                                                         Morning glories race
                                                 
                                                    A planted shovel becomes
                                                  
                                                         A willing playground

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  1. Date: 5/5/2009 5:43:00 AM

    ....Yet aside from this, again, I found the true softness within "Your Beautiful Heart and Soul," within all three writes of "Yours" this morning!!!:):)~Smile, and I ask myself~"How could someone so precious, tender, gifted and beautiful, ever hold onto hurt!!?":):)~And then I realize, its but only a moment!!!:):)~"Blessings, Warmth and Love To 'You and Yours Always Laurie Ginn, Forever, John!!!":):) Bye Dear Lady ~

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 5:33:00 AM

    Smile~This seems to be such as a metaphor!?~"Morning glories race~a planted shovel becomes~a willing playground"....Well, who's the shovel? And, who are the morning glories? And where is the playground? Smile, these are the only three questions I have!!!?~For there could be many different possible answers within reality!!?:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 8:31:00 PM

    Dear Laurie,You must be a gardener This Haiku is planted in my mind Great job Thank-YOU for YOUR comment on "My Lover's Eyes" LOVE ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 4:09:00 PM

    Wooow! very nice Haiku. Thank you for the warm and honest comment. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 4:48:00 AM

    How cute, Laurie. A shovel left a little too long and whala!!! A morning glory surprise. I love morning glories. I do hope that you have another shovel. They're harded to transplant. Thank you for this beautiful, haiku. Keep writing. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 8:59:00 PM

    I got a mental picture of how much you enjoy your garden, Laurie. "A willing playground"... is a striking line, and "Morning glories race": a bright and colorful image. The "planted shovel" : just a geniality you choose to create an unique metaphoric comparison. Do I have to say that I love this haiku?...No, right? That's what i thought. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 8:42:00 PM

    Looking forward to summer flowers. Nice haiku! I noticed you stuck to the 5 7 5 form. Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 3:07:00 PM

    this is a glory-a very good morning mood---excellent----charma;-)

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 10:07:00 AM

    Kiddo, huh? Bless you! You've made me feel young again!!! A cool HAIKU Laurie, in perfect form and with excellent word choices. Thanks honeybunch!!! Keith

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 8:10:00 AM

    Hi Laurie.... a nature lovers and gardeners heart speaks ! wonderful !

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 8:04:00 AM

    What an uplifting view. Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 3:16:00 PM

    Laurie always a winner Loved this little haiku. God bless, have a super day, Ron

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 1:34:00 PM

    Beautiful image, Laurie! You and Raul have mastered this poetic form well. I planted some morning glories near the screen around the backyard pool one year. They grew, clinging to the screen and bloomed every morning like a bright, violet carpet. Lovely poem about one of nature's most beautiful gifts.

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 11:11:00 AM

    Morning glories is a nice opening. Beautiful work...Raul

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 8:33:00 AM

    Morning glories are lovely and so is this haiku *^_^* Love this! Love me

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 7:56:00 AM

    Wow ... look at the contest ... the music of playing children rinsing the rancid air of care, ... the bloom of flowers shovelled under ... fantastic write.

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 7:54:00 AM

    Love this, Miss Laurie! Leaves me with a smile!!

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 6:26:00 AM

    This is well done my friend..love the write.