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The winners

Those who sit and study
how hard the work shall be,
indeed they are the ones
who shall fail.

But those who sit
and study the hard work,
indeed they are the ones
who shall prevail.

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  1. Date: 5/5/2009 2:20:00 PM

    Maryam, no pain no gain. I like the message. TY for the comment my friend. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 9:31:00 PM

    Interesting thought, Maryam! Clever and ingenious. To think about it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 4:57:00 PM

    Hard work does really pay off..thanks for the comment on my poem.

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 4:37:00 PM

    Maryam, Action, action, action... leads to success. the message is well told in your poem. Nice writing. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 11:42:00 AM

    Got a chuckle out of this one. So much truth in your words. Nice message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful day! Karen

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 6:27:00 PM

    The perfect title....winners indeed!! :)