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That Old House

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That Old House

That old house was old and rusty
But it reminded me of something
I didnt konw exactly what 
But I knew it had a meaning

That old house was painted gray 
But to me it just stood out
Yea the color had faded away 
But their was something about that house

That old house was very crooked 
And that grass just wasn't green
But theres some things that werent seen 
Some things that only I could see

That old house did have a reason
Why it caught my curiosity
It reminds me of my life
And the things that make me last
But the crooked doors and shattered windows
Are like the hurtful times from my past

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  1. Date: 4/29/2009 5:00:00 PM

    I can vision your description when I read each line. Very nice, I really like your poem.

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 4:37:00 PM

    Very nice! Lots of imagery=) enjoyed it very much! - darkpoet