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Quiet Comptemplation

.                                                         We sat on a hill

                                       Gazing at a mere wisp of a crescent moon

                                                         In a starless sky

                                                             No words

                                                               Silent

                                                           Contemplating

                                                                  Man

                                                                  God

                                                            The Universe

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  1. Chircop Avatar
    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/30/2009 1:58:00 PM
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    no words silent contemplating-great reminder here,sometimes life s too busy i forget,and i lovr the way you spaced this and n the shape of a cross---bravo and thanks again for your help-ans for your kind comment---charma
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    daver austin
    Date: 4/30/2009 7:45:00 AM
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    Contemplation is great! I've done it for years. Jesus said, "Go into your closet." Hey! That's where IT is! Love, daver
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 4/29/2009 8:13:00 AM
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    Dear Laurie, YOU have given me peace in this Superb write LOVE the layout LOVE ALWAYS... HG
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    Keith Bickerstaffe
    Date: 4/29/2009 3:48:00 AM
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    Hi Laurie! Kinda shaped like a chalice... uplifting, with excellent word choices. BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 4/28/2009 2:11:00 PM
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    Laurie, you know I LOVE! poems with pacing-space, I love the purity of this poem...Jim
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    Ronald Bingham
    Date: 4/28/2009 8:43:00 AM
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    I like Carrie's comment, it just radiates peace. God Bless, Ron
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 4/28/2009 8:20:00 AM
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    This would have been the most wonderful poem to fall asleep dreaming of....what peace it holds! (Wish I had had it last night). ~ love, C.
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    christopher higgins
    Date: 4/28/2009 7:30:00 AM
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    Wonderful that you are able to take time out and enjoy a minute of peace.
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    Christie Moses
    Date: 4/28/2009 7:04:00 AM
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    and what an endless contemplation it turns into....infinity is fascinating. Love me


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