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Heart Opens Its Eye

It's midnight again.
Thoughts of you follow me like the moon,
Light at my core,
A dream to undress by.
Clothes fall to the floor
like discarded leaves of artichokes.
My heart awake in beloved darkness, trembles.

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  1. Date: 9/20/2009 4:56:00 AM

    ......inspired me to write; and love.

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 8:55:00 AM

    Every line an image... again beautifully phrased and put together.... wonderful writing !

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 7:27:00 AM

    "Like discarded leaves of artichokes" Yes! A multi-senser. Makes the whole poem, which is o.k. otherwise too. You got it, kid! Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 11:44:00 PM

    compelling