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Suicide Mind

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Suicide Mind

What makes the decision
To flick the switch
To end ones life
For the sake of it
 
Troubled, debts
Bullied at school
Fork in the road
To let death rule
 
Mums, dads
Daughters and sons
What ever affects them 
They just can't outrun
 
Sadness and tears
By all left behind
Will they ever understand
Suicide Mind

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  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:45:00 PM
    I don't think they can fully understand unless they have struggled with the same feelings. Sadly it is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.

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    Date: 6/10/2014 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It sure is a door when one goes through and your greeted by 'Wheels of Confusion' <*> thank you Richard, James......
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 6:27:00 PM
    This is a great poem! Very short and straight to the chase.:)

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 1:16:00 PM
    Hard hitting and simple, in my opinion: Brilliant ! Makes me wonder why I didn't think of it first.

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 10:40:00 AM
    Bringing to light a subject that needs to be address. Sara

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 11:44:00 AM
    Hi James. This piece got to me but in a good way. My mother tried 4 times to end her life before getting the right help and medications she needed to help her live out her life before passing in piece in Gods time. No one, including myself could ever fully understand what was going on within herself despite her trying to explain. Sometimes even they don't know themselves. This helped me to remember her in a good way and to better understand her a little. Great write. Melody?

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 4:44:00 PM
    this is a very well written poem, and a very true one at that. i liked how you complared ending ones life to flicking a switch. very creative. i suppose we were on the same wave length at some point. thank you for all of your comments. kristina, 16

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 2:30:00 PM
    That's really sad =[.Thank you so much for commenting my poems

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 8:21:00 AM
    well done, and very true. sad write, but beautiful. thanks so much for the comment. <3 madison

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 4:05:00 AM
    James, Well said. I understand. If you don't mind, please read this poem that I wrote. http://www.poetrysoup.com/member_area/edit_my_poem.aspx?PoemID=149900 I am enjoying your poetry. And I'm OK. God blesses us all in His way. Stay strong and keep writing! Always, Dane