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Bohol Beach Bonfire



The wiggling whiff of smoke stings my eyes, 

         so I try to stoke back to life the buried embers.
         Now tiny tongues of flame sway, twist and wriggle 
         like snakes through parched leaves, devouring twigs,
         even sooty pieces of brittle rocks and pebbles.



As the dusk broods, darkens and deepens into night,

         my shadow shivers and shrivels away behind me.
         I gaze at the darkness beyond the dancing bonfire:
         the calls of unseen cuckoos and the ticktack tapping 
         of a faraway woodpecker have all died down.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2009 8:36:00 AM

    Unique.

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 4:14:00 AM

    Romeo, love the time-lapse wistful thoughts! great poem! Jim

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 12:53:00 AM

    Nice serene picture of a peaceful Caribbean island shore. Kathleen

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 12:22:00 AM

    Great imagery here... I really like this one. Very serene. Smiles from Lolita