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You poets suck as psychologist


First chapter:
She gently sooths my soul with a quixotic grasp
Yet she’s a ruthless (use imagination)
Her emotions unstable like pitches in opera
She teases touching and leaving like breezes 
Love works like God…in mysteries 

2nd chapter:
I read faultless poems by my elder poets
My heart temper tantrums from elaborate adjectives use to describe her
My eyes bleed, squinting wishing they never laid pupils on these poems
 
Final chapter:
Reading poems of confusion from elders
Poems based of melancholic love tragedies
Passion filled tragic that plagues me in an immature form
How naïve to believe that adults would’ve figured her out
My peripheral vision fights over the red X button and the next poem button
The X button wins.
No one can figure out the depths of love.
Thanks for nothing. 

Love and peace.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2009 4:33:00 AM

    LOL..anyone who reads my work and is seeking help will be more screwed up after reading it..I think I need a shrink also..LOL..too many demons telling me stories...strong writing.

  1. Date: 4/23/2009 11:03:00 PM

    Great writing and what a wonderful way to express anger and disappointment. As for me, I write what I think and feel, read what others write and know I am not alone, and then my friend... I seek therapy from an actual psychologist. I think everyone could use a good one at least every know and then to remind them that they aren't anymore crazy than the rest of the world. LOL Here's hoping things get better for you. Many smiles from a friend, not a psychologist... Lolita

  1. Date: 4/23/2009 10:52:00 PM

    Jim, Are you saying you need a psychologist? Or do we all need one? LOL We poets pour out our hearts while trying to bestow a little kindness and encouragement...Don't count on us as psychologists ... We don't have the traing and we don't charge the fees.... I bet a good psychologist would have a field day on this site.LOL It's all in love. Accepting, giving, etc. God is Love...the Bible says. Good luck figuring Love out. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 4/23/2009 8:39:00 PM

    We're not psychologists, just poets who offer compassion at times.