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Morning Light

Dense fog lingers and crawls
Forrest trails lead to the falls

Cool shaded streams flow silently
Stars strewn above shine brilliantly

Morning sky flirting with night
Clouds run together dark meets light

Orange Rust Clouds trying to shine
Darkness and time staying behind

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  1. Date: 4/22/2009 4:49:00 PM

    POW!!! you hit the mark with this one. John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 11:27:00 AM

    Absolutely beautiful....

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 8:25:00 AM

    Wow. I must agree I am overwhelmed with your imagery here. Gorgeous. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 8:49:00 PM

    i just wana say this is a fantastic write and i also fixed the mess up on that one poem of mine thanks noticing for me

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 6:48:00 PM

    Incredible imagery flowing through this write...loved this read.

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 3:30:00 PM

    Excellent use of imagery! lovely write! Laura :)