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tic tock

tic tock
tic tock
teardrop
sodium-flavored
lollipop
                  long lines
                  stand alone
                  tic tock
                  time goes
                      on
                   waiting
short hand
long hand
fun fast
hurt slow
                  tic tock
                  tic tock
                  teardrop
                  sodium-flavored
                  lollipop
we all
lick

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  1. Date: 4/23/2009 7:50:00 AM
    this is great...makes me smile after a long day from school...take care... _chily_

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 8:44:00 PM
    I love your unique style, so clever!

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 6:36:00 AM
    Good layout....good idea....all about all of us at one time or another. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 3:16:00 AM
    i like the rhymth tick tock ;-)