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Heroshima

Heroshima
Can ewe balance out those two final hits against the lives saved those that would have 
continued WAR on Asian Soil those days of hell of hurting men caught by bullits and the 
bayonets? Can just two bombs blasting death be counted as salvation won for all those 
young boys girls old men women who died instantly in two Atomic Blasts over those two 
cities of Japan. Nagasaki Heroshima eye have seen the END of time the BOOKS of GOD are 
open when the Dead Arrive. Arise all sleepers in those Graves can GOD usher in those 
SOULS into new places now to stay is there a place for JAPAN in Jesus Heaven? For those of 
us who sinned and suffered radiation burns lost our skins and mortal coils gone some died 
just screaming out in pain all normal living gone perhaps no time to say your HOLY NAMME 
of Jesus. Can they live there inside your heaven is it still possible that you forgive them for 
once upon the time it came to me today that a Just and Perfect GOD adjudges perfectly 
those in suffering words can not describe no time to utter words of salve; but deeds looked 
at made right by YOU salvation won given now to all. Eventide has come today to those 
whom tomb decay whom die threw no fault of there own. Just hit twice dumped down on 
Killed with anguish very slow. A special place in heaven for all those special people of Japan. 

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 7:54:00 PM
    Very amazing thoughts here. No, dropping the A-bombs didn't really solve anything, because the U.S.S.R declared war on America after Nagasaki. So yes, one war was averted, but then the paranoia of the cold war ensued, which gave rise to unrest in Asia and the Middle East. The C.I.A. got involved and trained Hussein and Bin Laden. So if you follow the entire trail of those two bombs, they definitely weren't the answer. But what was? Great poem~Chris

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 4:54:00 AM
    This war will be never be deleted from the heart of American people. Very beautiful peom. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 2:24:00 PM
    Hiroshima....bullets..ewe/you..eye/I.. NAMME/NAME...The message is VERY important....and war is hell. I agree with you, nothing will ever wash away the horrid deed done in the name of America. Light & Love