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Loose Hearts

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Loose Hearts

Loose hearts,
Linger,separate,
Tear apart.
Loose hearts,
Shrink.wilt,
Twig of life sours tart.
Loose hearts,
crumble,shudder
viscous words shoot in blacken darts.
Loose hearts,
tighten,strengthen,
venture towards a mended start.
Loose hearts,
weep, tangle, unite.
Love sprinkled over happy a la carte.



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  1. Date: 5/19/2011 5:07:00 AM
    Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Robin. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 11:43:00 AM
    wow i enjoy your style of writing

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 10:13:00 AM
    Very interesting analysis of all the capabilities and potentials of "loose hearts." Like the upbeat tone in the last line. The way the hearts "venture toward a mended start" and "unite" provide hope that is often missing in love poems. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 1:42:00 PM
    wonderful-and very good a la carte you sprinkled here-charma

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 2:45:00 PM
    Oh the journeys of the heart. Often complicated, always emotional. Awesome write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 11:11:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind comments. I really like your style of writing, it just flows effortlessly. Nikhita.