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My blood sugar drops./ No longer in tip top shape. In a dazed state, I underrate the truth in 
every word./ I wish my song was as beautiful as that of a birds./ And my connection to the 
earth, was as strong as that of a worms./ We live our lives afraid of germs: microscopic 
beings we can't disturb./ Unable to control that which is not seen./ Irradiating the seeds to 
everything green, so that when the heart of a child sings, they won't know what it means./ 
They've been transformed into spritually impaired sentient beings. In love with superficial 
things./ Blinded by the idea that love resides in a pair of expensive gold rings./ Deaf to the 
lullaby that mother earth sings.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2009 4:32:00 PM

    Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Best wishes. Karen

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 1:03:00 PM

    Nice work Brooke, congrats on your feature...Raul

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 2:50:00 PM

    Brooke, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann,

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 9:18:00 AM

    Brooke, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 9:22:00 AM

    Congrats Brooke on your free verse being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 4:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 5:28:00 PM

    Best wishes, and Congratulations on having your poem featured this week! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 2:35:00 PM

    Hi Brooke, lovely poem. Anyway, congrats my friend on your featured poem. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando