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Lust

lust is a scary thing fore
it reduces us to base
the core, the body without a face
the pleasure of the pimp and whore

lust bursts bubbles wide
opening our lips to learn
the contours of bodies that burn
for more than the surface but what's inside

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  1. Date: 4/16/2009 10:44:00 PM

    I love this one, excellent flow and powerful delivery.

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 6:01:00 PM

    i love your style so much, i absolutly love it...your amazing

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 3:04:00 PM

    this one great too,im glad my hands led me here,i like the last two verses,its so true,lust is based on desire,whilst love sees deeper,love sees the inside of the other,inside of the heart-charma

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 12:48:00 PM

    wow I like this

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 12:38:00 PM

    "the contours of bodies that burn/for more than the surface but what's inside" ?? This is superb,Brian, Excelent! Ruben.