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have you?

have you ever?
i mean ever?
with somebody you just met
just touched for the first time
just licked
like a lime twist
in yo ghetto blues sunshine
i mean really

have you ever?

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  1. Date: 4/17/2009 10:54:00 AM

    do we kiss and tell? A great flow of words, love the line just licked like a lime twist, great stuff Brian!

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 4:10:00 PM

    Excellent and blush worthy.

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 11:55:00 AM

    Provocative Exciting Flirtatious Youthful Yes, I like this. And I can’t help but wonder…have you ever?