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Runnin'

her place smells like lavender
or violets
i've slept here many times before
but never well
never fitfully
alien atmosphere i suppose
the bare bulbs in the bathroom
kill my shadow
i'm a stranger in the kitchen
smoking weed on the couch
pissing in the tiolet
and screwing her in the shower
intimately removed
she wants me to move in
i miss her already

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  1. Date: 4/17/2009 10:57:00 AM

    I am quickly becoming a fan Brian, great work! and a very fitting title

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 5:59:00 PM

    wow brian, wow

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 4:13:00 PM

    You should have a warning on your poetry and I mean that in the best possible way.

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 10:42:00 AM

    hooked on it ... I feel the mood. Bravo