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The Sowing

Upon the wind sheltered hillside,
the sharp tang of metal and the sting of salt air lay
over a field of blood-red poppies, no Flanders Field.

At years fall, fields of rape roll like waves,
in the harshness of winter-sleet, stray boulders bow;
like the backs of mothers, daughters sowing.
Their nails torn, ragged and bleeding.
They bleed by the moon, and son upon the field.
No white crosses mark their passing.

For hundreds of years, and crops of rape, barley and wheat;
small hands, soft hands, and soft thighs bleed.
They bleed daughters, and sons.
They birth the fields and in the fields by consent or rape;
unadorned by silver stars or purple hearts.

Today, as May's sun wakes the blood blasted pasture,
each precious drop blooms…..a heroines acknowledgement
the poppies yield.

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:26:00 PM

    I love this, Its unique x

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:40:00 AM

    seeking inspiration in your work, found it here. Absolutely stunning write. You are a leader among poets.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:47:00 AM

    heroic poem! All the best to you in the new year Debbie. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 AM

    This poem has so much dept, that one can read it more then once and take so much out of it each time. You have used your metaphors in such an excellent way. Quite astounding !

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:53:00 PM

    I really like the depth and insight found within your words !! Well done !!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:31:00 AM

    Outstanding work Debbie! Loved it!

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:48:00 AM

    Excellent. So beautiful and so sensual words. Vocabulary is outstanding, I mean the set of words and their relations which were made through the poem

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:35:00 PM

    The play on words is awesome Deb. I loved the end. My fav naturally.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:00:00 PM

    Soupmail :) hugs, Catie

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:10:00 PM

    marvellous lines from a feeling poet endowed with great skill

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Excellent Debbie, the way you play the words and their double meanings son-sun, heroine-heroin and in it's beauty and hidden horror it screams as so many other crops of the devil have in the past and some still do like the poppy that go on to enslave more than just their harvesters. Fav

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:50:00 AM

    Beautiful Poem, Debbie. It is as beautiful as the poem, "Flander's Field" by Lieutenant Colonel John McCrae who was a soldier, physician and poet. He wrote that and other poems right after the war. Your poem has as much validity, truth, sentiments, and emotion as his. Very well done. It deserves top placement. Big Smiles.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:33:00 AM

    simply astounding work here Debbie!!!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:53:00 PM

    A gem of a poem .

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

    "Ask and it will be given to you; seek and you will find; knock and the door will be opened to you." : ) ...Done!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:15:00 PM

    I remember this gem! A wonderful poem, Deborah! Ruben.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/17/2012 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    can't tell you how many contests HERE I entered it in and lost [you must believe that you know what writes of yours are GOOD and keep putting them out there until the right people see them!]
  1. Date: 6/29/2011 3:56:00 PM

    Beautiful poetry Debbie , no wonder it won!! Checking out the site and came across this beautiful work. Anne

  1. Date: 4/2/2011 11:03:00 AM

    I sent you soupmail.

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 10:58:00 AM

    Oh Debbie, Congratulations on your win in the contest for this perfect poem. It is so wonderful, I have read it several times now. Lov, Shar

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 5:20:00 AM

    Congrats on you superb win with this beautiful and original work Debbie. You have soup mail!

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:31:00 AM

    My congrats Debbie to your well deserved win!....Gert

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 10:57:00 AM

    Much respect. I like this one more each time I read it. Keep your pens bleeding and your keyboard beating! ~JS Lambert

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:16:00 AM

    Oh and a Big Congrats on your win too.

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:15:00 AM

    Another piece of your beautiful poetry, I can't stop reading your work. Thank you for your encouraging comment. I am ecstatic to have come 6th in your contest. It's so nice to be a part of Soup :-)

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 6:29:00 PM

    Beauiful to read....found myself swaying and laughing and emotional. Truly stunning poetry

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 12:19:00 PM

    Wow this is amazing. Just amazing.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:26:00 AM

    great mom! Please keep winning for me;)

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 12:17:00 PM

    This poem demands an immediate emotional response from the reader. Very well done.

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 11:07:00 AM

    fantastic

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 6:47:00 PM

    I like you're writing and I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read it.

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