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Quiet The Cries

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Quiet The Cries

The Heavenly skies wept,
as an angel stood watch in Heaven’s garden,
while the other angels slept,
it was not completely dark,
in the center of the garden were benches,
and this place was like a beautiful park,
near the entrances there were angel shape sculptures glowing,
waterfalls, flowing,
flowers with God’s breath, growing,
the sculptures were designed for illumination,
and that was clearly showing,
in this piece of Heaven’s nation,
the caretaker of this garden had taken pains
to create a comfortable and aesthetically pleasing environment
for all spirits who come here,
it helps wash away the worries and the fear,
and when the souls cross over,
it would be gentle to their eyes,
after leaving their loved one in tears,
this will help quiet the cries.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2009 2:11:00 PM
    read again, Frank, even more touching, whew....clairvoyant.....jmg

  1. Date: 4/13/2009 10:19:00 AM
    Frank, your words always find the interspaces and their deserts bloom through magic ... sure the Holy Spirit applauds. Unique skills, my friend

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 12:09:00 PM
    Visions, visionaries. Thanks for all the reading you do of me. HUGS Hope you have entered my contest! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 6:27:00 AM
    magnificent Frank! your poems are thrilling!! you took an idea and expressed it perfectly! thanks for all your comments! jmg

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 4:44:00 AM
    Frank, a great metaphysical write, full of profound vision, beauty and anticipatory love. High regards.

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 6:16:00 PM
    One day my friend, one day we will see them; beautiful, beautiful, love, Kristin

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 3:02:00 PM
    What a beautiful portrait of heaven, Frank! When we lose someone, it is good to think of the afterlife this way. Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 2:49:00 PM
    Smile~It almost makes me think of The Garden of Eden Frank!!!?:):)~What a very wonderfully written song of faith and comfort~filled with beautiful images amid peaceful thoughts~as only a heart flowing with Gods love and unbound caring could truly and within sincerety do!!!?:):)~"Smile, Beautiful Write My Friend!!!":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!":):) Bye ~

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 1:21:00 PM
    Serenity at it's best~

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 1:04:00 PM
    The comfort that this poem embraces, is so filled with peace and love...wonderful thoughtful write! Well done in your magic style. Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 12:26:00 PM
    i wish i go to your heaven,you describe it wonderfully, a nice place to be,im sure my friend's son is there in the magic place near waterfalls flowing-lovely description here-charma

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 12:06:00 PM
    Wow, a peacelful, serene place. I loved the imagery use, great job...Raul