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INCOMPLETE

Light fades hard
darkness falls
All hope is lost
for my broken heart

Swallowed up by pain
pain I can't bear
Where is my light
to guide me outta here

Fate has torn a hole in my heart
too large for me to repair
Why did you have to twist the knife
so far into my aching heart

You said you'd never leave
"take my hand and trust", you said
Now you are so far away
and all I feel inside is dead

I thought our love was so solid
we seemed to have everything
Then one day you were gone
and now I am left.... incomplete 

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  1. Date: 4/12/2009 5:37:00 AM
    Hi Tulisha First of all let me say, It's so nice to meet you!A emotional powerhouse. Very well done. Reminds me of my poem Snowbird. Truly enjoyed. Happy day to you hun. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry in the future. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 5:32:00 PM
    oh but I have my dear Carolyn, thanks, this is an older poem. Glad you like it

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 2:38:00 PM
    I can feel your pain in this heartfelt poem, TuLisha. I hope you find someone who makes you feel complete again. Love, Carolyn