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Day falls into night, uncontrollable heart pace

        Ideal, compassionate swaying towards,
        Nightfall crystals the moon’s fade.
        The stars dance to the soft rhythm of love

 Into the moonlight, dissolved diamonds in your eyes
	
	Jade, evergreen forests serenade me
	Such a glance across the table…
	Subdued into hypnosis, beauty bit me.

Placing delicate fingers, brushing your forlorn face

	Soft mellow cheeks, red and pink abashes
	Fuzzy little blond hairs on the edges
	Contagious, such sensitivity is unbearable

Chocolate Swiss Ice Cream, your favorite, time flies…

	Syrup glazes on lips, as they flush, lick ‘em off
	Puffy and blue from the cold taste, warm ‘em off
	Smiles, a seductive pout – more syrup, wipe ‘em off

These feelings won’t go away, inside – a spontaneous race

	A wiggle, a snort, a sneeze, a flare, an itch
	Adorable nostrils perk my eyes with grins
	You never kept me from stop smiling that day…

Thrice as fast, it beats without doubt, no matter – it never dies

	Attractiveness, ostentatious looks bestowed upon
	A flirt there, a hint here, a look there, a smile here
	Non- verbal connection, the foreplay – it sings a song

I’ve chosen you, with no other reason, my heart beats for you.

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  1. Date: 1/27/2010 3:53:00 PM

    Sami~ Intense language you use throughout this whole piece just wonderful! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 11:36:00 PM

    You sure know how! Erotic and sensually charged to the Max!

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 2:18:00 PM

    Sami, this is absolute paralyzes. Oh, what love can do to a person! I admire your style mucho. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 10:51:00 AM

    Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 10:37:00 AM

    Your feature is a highlight Sami. Congratulations. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 8:44:00 AM

    Sami, congratulations on having your work featured this week! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 8:27:00 AM

    This poem, so beautiful....I continue to admire your unique, magnificent style...no one else writes the way you do....(I say this honestly!). So well deserving the featured page. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 3:15:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 2:14:00 PM

    Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Sami >> James

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 1:49:00 PM

    Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Sami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 7:31:00 PM

    Sami, kudos on this selected poem going through the finals! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 10:39:00 AM

    Congrats on having two poems making it.

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 11:13:00 PM

    Congrates on your wonderful poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 6:03:00 AM

    so a sweet love and lover! such innocence shines. Nice win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 5:13:00 PM

    Dear Sami, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:28:00 PM

    Congrats!! Patricia

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 11:39:00 AM

    That's a beauty Sam..good luck in the second round... farah

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 11:39:00 AM

    Sami, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 2:49:00 PM

    What a great love poem and i love the last verse..excellent...Charma

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Fantastic write Sami! Achingly romantic, and very sweet! Donna

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 12:36:00 PM

    What a profound love poem. Reflects your deep love. Your aesthetically chosen words paint a beautiful picture of your love and do wonders on the minds of the readers. You are remarkable. This reminds me of a Quatrain from my book Rubaiyat of Josh Malihabadi - A Drop and the Ocean: I give a leaf the garden's beauty/ I shape a word into a melody/ If I get just a drop of water/ I turn it into a fathomless sea. Thanks for your beautiful perception of the contents of my Haiku Buried Hearts. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 12:15:00 PM

    An exquisite poem of love Sami, wonderful reading... ps thank you for selecting my poem as one of your winners

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 5:24:00 AM

    great love poem! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 11:31:00 AM

    Nice piece I enjoyed the poem it is structured well. I can feel you are writing from the heart and it shows in this piece. Thanks for commenting on Captured Soul and Free Spirit compliments coming from such a talent mean a lot.

  1. Date: 4/14/2009 8:54:00 PM

    Dear Sami, I am truly overwhelmed. Thank you so much for such a wonderful honor. Thank you for the time and effort in sponsoring this awesome contest. Wow. Just thanks so much from my heart. If you write a blog I will transfer this! So happily surprised! Hugs, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 4/14/2009 11:53:00 AM

    Hello, love this piece, at first I was going to leave because it was about you and her doing. Well anyone this is a very classy piece and enjoyed reading your smooth as silk poetry.

  1. Date: 4/13/2009 10:11:00 AM

    Stirring lines, wonderful poem, my friend. Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 1:56:00 PM

    Beautifully structured. All the best.

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 10:18:00 PM

    Smile~Ahh, the heart-beat of love!!!:):)~"Hello My Dear & Gifted Poetic Friend!!!:):)~What an absolutely wonderful description of a moment in time with a hopeful love of Your life!!!?:):)~Smile~"Very Creative, Colorful & Image Filled Write My Brother~"Great Poetry!!!:):)~"Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours,' John!!!":):)

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 4:08:00 PM

    Well, this is delicious and snuggly. :) What a lucky lady indeed. That last line is just precious. Love Christie

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