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Desiree Dompire

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Desiree Dompire

i need a friend 
when i have had a rough night 
i need a friend
when i simply need a friend to go to the mall with
i need a friend
to joke with when i am in the cafteria at school
i need a friend
when i have no sholder to cry on
i need a friend
when my hopes are down 
i need a friend
when i got in a fight with my mom the other night
i need a friend
when i breakup with my boyfriend (that has not happened yet)
i need a friend
when i need a refuge from an argument my mom and i had
i need a friend
but not just any friend
i need you.


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  1. Date: 4/17/2009 6:23:00 AM

    Beautiful...It sounds like lyric. Pls try to sing it so that you see how it ryhms...remove the brackets. It needs some splendor's depth. I wish you all the best.

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 2:19:00 PM

    I love you commenting on your work! fun, fun! this is a very creative, sincere poem! love it! jmg

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 5:36:00 AM

    awwwwww. that is very cute. i love it. say, any new poems?

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 12:32:00 PM

    Compelling end, great work...Raul

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 8:36:00 AM

    Friendship is the best of our sheltering trees, may your friend ever be the angel by your side. Love.