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SomeONE

A tender touch of your raw lips
Warms my cooled blood.
The gentle trace of your stern jaw
By my graceful, broken touch.
I navigate the icy sapphire
below your darkened brow.
Tempted, chained to you;
There is no escape now.

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  1. Date: 9/17/2009 5:26:00 PM

    This is an amazing poem! I think it's just perfect!!!!!!!! *Snakelady*

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 2:04:00 AM

    Those doggone hormones just suck us in. Beautifully written expressing your passion. Sara

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 9:16:00 PM

    How well you capture the concept of being a prisoner of love. Very passionate, yet tender poem, Heather!

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 5:08:00 PM

    Love the sensuality and the texture. Great write.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 3:35:00 PM

    VERY EROTIC! I loved the warm feeling I got from reading this piece.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 2:35:00 PM

    What is more magnetic: the kiss, the poem, or the pantings of the heart ... I cannot see escape from either or all. Intelligently crafted write. Peace and love

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 12:48:00 PM

    now that one tough lip lock. jhl