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Paradise

When I look into your eyes
you take me away to paradise
we'd sit beneath the trees
watching the butterflies and the busy bees
we'd listen to water trickling down the stream
and on our face a smile would surly gleam
there is no one around for as far as I can see
for this special place is for you and for me
paradise is a beautiful place
I see it every time I look at your wonderful face.

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Nice to read your work today. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 12:01:00 PM

    Beautiful tribute to love, congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 7:14:00 AM

    what a heartfelt love poem - congrats on being featured -

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 5:46:00 AM

    Diane, this is such a beautiful love poem. Isn't it great to be in love. Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Dane.

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 7:04:00 PM

    I mlove the meaning and this is a great poem!!!-congraulations on being featured-smiles-hugs from your fellow souper-Rhonda Kay

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 8:43:00 PM

    Congratulation on being featured! I can see the apple in this poem. Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 6:38:00 AM

    great poem with great meaning, congratulations on being featured.

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 5:07:00 AM

    Congratultions Diane on your feattured poem, thankyou for telling me about mine I didn't know. God Bless. Leon

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 7:11:00 PM

    "Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 1:20:00 PM

    Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 12:11:00 PM

    Congrats on being featured this week, nice poem by the way...Raul

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 8:27:00 AM

    Congrats on your feature this week Diane.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 6:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 4:11:00 AM

    Hello, it is indeed a paradise when you are with the one you love. Congratulations. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 1:04:00 AM

    great lovepoetry Diane.Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 4:40:00 PM

    Just flows right off the tongue and into the heart. Vibrant and pleasant.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 10:07:00 AM

    a place we all wish for, you've captured in this fine poem! Diane, Best Always, Jim

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 10:07:00 AM

    And what a paradise it is! such a pleasant read. Thank you.