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The Battleground

My heart is a battleground
Enclosed by the pericardium
Involuntarily, it shuns the foe
The left and right atriums at war
Facing no other option
But to endure this wrecked situation
This is just a systematic circulation
Overflowed by blood, both forces debate
Rage, anger, fury, and humiliation
This warfare must come to an end
Both parties give in their ammunition
But wait, it's a little too late
Destiny has already determined this heart's fate

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  1. Date: 4/14/2009 5:02:00 PM
    Beautiful.

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 10:24:00 AM
    I am waiting on you to write more ... I've got to find where destiny leads.

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 5:35:00 PM
    I'm afraid I can't answer that. How about you let it be whatever it is that you want it to be :)

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 2:13:00 PM
    true true a battleground it is. whats the destiny? jhl

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 12:55:00 PM
    Thank you very much. I appreciate the comment.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 7:54:00 AM
    A heart is too beautiful thing to waste, I know it, because this poem came from it. Become the captain of your ship again, keel your destiny where you will, we are the master of it.