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sea

ribbons of blues grays and greens
surround me in a fortress fit for a queen
the noises so forign to me
where am i the beautiful sea

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  1. Date: 4/7/2009 12:30:00 PM
    Nice work, I like the ending...Raul

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 2:14:00 PM
    soft, sweet poem, Dani, nice! Jim

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 1:10:00 PM
    This makes me think of floating in the Gulf of Mexico off of the coast of Panama City... Relaxing and beautiful. Your poem took me there. Thank you. Your words elicit feelings. nice rhyming, too.