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LOSERS

Liquid sun, steaming rain
outcasted huricane, shocking pain
sunny microwave, wet freak
electric flood, mild phsique
raining volts, empty meter
strange hail, solar heater

i have good days and bad days just like you
on your scale it probably bad to worse
ive never been popular never known what to do
its like a weather report for Belfast you know
the clouds in the sky theres either many or few

Liquid sun, steaming rain
outcasted huricane, shocking pain
sunny microwave, wet freak
electric flood, mild phsique
raining volts, empty meter
strange hail, solar heater

Or mybe its like a electric meter
mines always near or empty
ive never had a girlfriend long enough to be a cheater
thou i wouldnt do that type of thing
i feel undeserving, i stay cold, dont deserve a heater

Liquid sun, steaming rain
outcasted huricane, shocking pain
sunny microwave, wet freak
electric flood, mild phsique
raining volts, empty meter
strange hail, solar heater

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  1. Date: 12/20/2009 8:58:00 AM
    Interesting setup for your acrostic poem... reads well between the lines too... just so u will know.. we all have those good days and bad .. some months are worse than others.. but in the end.. "its all good" so keep that thought in mind... enjoy your Sunday... football mania possess me during the season.. I can't think of anything else.. even poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S. SOUP MAIL REPLY