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Stunning?

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Stunning?

She stood there,
light brown hair,
elegantly displayed,
cascaded,
almost like a stunning wave,
her expression soft,
her emotions could enslave,
she wore a long,
teasing red formal gown,
that almost touched the ground,
she was the toast of the town,
the slit provocatively up to mid thigh,
on the left side,
she was confident, 
but she did have something to hide,
her gleaming lips parted in a small smile,
she walked with so much pride,
men staring, mouths wide,
luminous gaze,
but the other women were holding back laughter,
they sensed something in the maze,
they chuckled, snickered, but held it in with all their might,
they knew the lovely creature was a fake,
she was merely a transvestite,
and that was no mistake,
but no matter how good you look on the outside,
nothing could ever beat how beautiful a real women is on the inside.

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  1. Date: 6/30/2009 7:50:00 PM
    I'd have to say sunshine, of all the weirdness that I've enjoyed of yours,,,this is my favorite piece. The last two lines show how thoughtful you really are. Speaking of really are,,,where are you?

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 11:25:00 PM
    Frank - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 6:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Dane Ann

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 2:56:00 AM
    Cleverly thought out, you draw your reader in with a great twist at the end! Liked the style and believe it to be a deserved feature this week! Well done!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 7:02:00 PM
    congradulations on being featured this week-great poem am looking forward to reading more of your poems-your fellow souper-Rhonda kay

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 4:10:00 AM
    The third leg like a third rail surprise ... got ya! When the object of beauty exist in the borderland of gender identity do we still say she or shim? Do you think a shim would contest your last line? Well executed, good write, my friend. Thanks for your comments on recent write. Peace and love

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 5:41:00 PM
    Stunning images here and yes true beauty runs deep...I have seen many beautiful women on the outside but inside, just as nasty as they come...People need to realize-looks are not always going to be there and what's inside is what counts...Congratulations on your wonderful feature this week...GB Always, Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 3:55:00 PM
    cong. on your poem featured this week-i loved it !and i wish "rapid impact"was featured too,its my favourite!!

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 2:41:00 PM
    It is amazing that a man can see the beauty of the soul within a woman. Great write. Congratulations on it being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 1:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 9:53:00 AM
    Hey look at you sunshine, featured and famous. Loved it the first time and worth reading again to find a man that knows true beauty.

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 9:04:00 AM
    congrads on having your work featured on the home page. love this write, it had a very nice flow the entire way through. love and peace:james

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 8:24:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature this week Frank .Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 3:04:00 PM
    this made me laugh.sexy transvestite,i imagine you;-)dating her,though i have to say that maybe later in life i may have kids,and if they turn out to be transvestites,i love themjust the same,right?for a change not scary poetry,i sleep well;-),i needed this ow so much,then i thought someone making nice faces,but a fake,there's nothing better than being an honest real nice woman inside and out;-)she can be both im sure.dont you think?

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 1:01:00 PM
    You kiddin? I can't plop a poem without you!

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 10:25:00 AM
    Awwww how extremely sweet sunshine, I always wait until the end on most of yours and this was such a wonderful happy surprise. Ya made me smile.

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 9:21:00 AM
    Well frankie boy you write this very well...they all saw the third leg...LOL.

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 9:13:00 AM
    LOL One might find extra parts on this lady where they would not want to. I don't know why, but I just love this poem. It made me smile. I love the ending. Seems a profound message there, Frank. Love Christie